Prompt
Character: a
police inspector Place: flight of
uneven stairs
Situation:
two more days to live Object: a
submarine When: when we were in France
Inspector
Radley put his hands onto the side of the boat to steady himself, the speed that
they were going at he was surprised that no one had fallen overboard!
It felt like
an age before he finally saw the submarine in the distant waters. He still
couldn’t believe that he was even here! Whisked away from his usual duties
because of an urgent message he had received from his life-long friend and
Commander in the navy, just that morning.
The message
had been vague. It read:
Dear Brian, do
you remember when we were in France last year and I got taken away on an urgent
matter? Things have come to a head. Please come, it’s a matter of life and
death, transport has been arranged, we need to talk. I have been told I only
have a few days to live, hurry! Regards John.
Brian kept
thinking what that last sentence implied and he had to swallow several times to
get rid of the lump in his throat. He couldn’t bear the idea that John wouldn’t
be part of his life for much longer.
Finally, the
boat pulled up next to the submarine and Brian wished that he had better sea
legs as he tried to navigate himself up the uneven step ladder that they had
thrown over the side. Eventually he reached the top and was distraught to see
that his once tall proud friend was now a shadow of his former self, he
wouldn’t have even recognised him if he hadn’t of been expecting to see him
there. What on earth has happened? Brian
thought.
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